(03-09-2010, 12:44 AM)losler Wrote: Hello again!
The Brisbane study group attempted this question too, here is our attempt
A few comments inserted into your answer. I wasn't too enthused by this one; I think it would have scored something like 4+ 4 +4 and I'd probably then be slightly more generous and just about allow it to scrape a pass overall.
So what do I think was wrong with it?
In essence it didn't convince me that you fully knew what you were talking about; there was too much vaguary and buzz-words that I am dubious whether you actually understand.
Actually Part 1 was reasonable and scored as such, though didn't demonstrate awareness of the wide range of potential issues. See also earlier comments re interpretation of meaning of the question set.
Part 2 I felt was weak, rather vague and a bit confused in places. Whereas one can asume that a module 1 question is not likely to be wanting great technical detail, you should have given a clear overview of the different activities in the process; it read as a rather disjointed jumble of more or less relevant items but failed completely to give the impression of PROCESS.
I guess that as designers you may not have got that personal experience but have just acquired a hazy idea; certainly gave me that impression. It was fair enough to supplement the actual testing activities by the ancilliary items you included and had the core been sound, then these would have been the "icing on the cake"; as it was these only served to further the impression that you felt the need to include them because you knew that the kernel was somewhat lacking. This perhaps may be unfair, but I guess that an examiner has fundamentally to mark partially on subjective impression like this and so I suggest you would not have got a pass mark within this section.
Part 3. Like the "curate's egg",
parts of this were excellent. It was however spoilt for me by the impression given that you didn't really appreciate fully what it would actuslly mean in the real world. It was generally too vague and hence I conclude that your understanding is quite weak.
A good answer would I think have given some specific examples of things that might be failing of various consequences, for example
a) a weak contact spring which meant that detection might be intermittent as a train passes in the vicinity (reliability implications, signal reversion issues) g
b) a key component in the drive gear that could become dislodged / seize up and cause the points to jam in midstroke and defy attempts even to manually wind across,
c) a defect that could mean that the firm retention of the switch tongues could not be relied upon during the passage of a train and thus give immediate safety concerns.
This approach would have demonstrated some better understanding of point machines (detect, set, lock) and the
relationship between faults and failures and the variation of their RAMS consequences and would also have given contrasting examples for which different remedial actions / mitigations would be appropriate.
So not a disaster but certainly not one of your better efforts. At this stage it is probably more important that
a) you recognise what it was about this question / answer that meant that I didn't view you in the best light and learn re amending your presentation (if you think that was the problem) or determine to avoid such a question,
than
b) learning re the subject topic themselves