(11-06-2010, 07:55 PM)KonduriRaghavakumar Wrote: I am attempting this year mod1 and mod2 exam. Just trying to answer the previous paper questions. suggestions are welcome. I had seen this question and I took one half hour to answer this much.
Thank you
Context
I imagine that you are describing a typical commissioning in India; in some respcts it may be different from the UK so do get used to starting your answerwith some form of context statement. Similarly you have used abbrieviations such as RE that I do not know and have difficulty guessing; the examiner would have the same difficulty. If the full words are used on the first occasion of use, it does give a better basis for working out what is meant, even if the term / practice is unfamiliar.
Describe Principal activities
You haven't done this; I believe you misunderstood what was wanted. The things you wrote may be useful elswhwere in the question and if so the examiner would give you credit, but for what was wanted here for the 5 marks there is very little relevant.
However you did say:
errect signals,
energising track circuits
installation of point machines
functional / principles testing
so you would get some credit for these but you shuld have firstlly included more items and also given a little more detail that would show first show a deeper understanding and also be useful to you when answering parts b) and c)- therefore include a variety of risks.
Hence I'd I have said such things as:
#1 using a road-rail vehicle having a jib to crane into position a signal onto a pre-cast base, ensuring that it is safe to climb and correctly aligned and then terminating a prepared tail cable in the head,
#2 performing a 650V power supply changeover to deaden an existing group of locations to permit their recovery including removing some old redundant batteries,
#3 "P Way" track staff installing extended timbers, then drilling the rails for installation of a new point machine. Lifting into position, connecting mechanically and electrically. Adjusting, gauging, checking power operation and detection.
#4 renewing the barriers at a level crossing with a vehicular road closure but the need to permit the passage of pedestrians across the railway
#5 undertaking fringe alterations changing the wiring within an existing relay room and lineside locations, circuit testing locally and then between separate sites and finally functional testing from a remote signalbox
There is 5 minutes for this first section so you should be giving 5 descriptions at least as detailed as above or 10 briefer items
Identify risks / mitigations
You have definitely put in some useful content, but I suggest that you need to relate the mitigations to the risks more clearly and consistently. Sometimes you have, but not always- particularly the latter entries.
I think I'd have used a table with separate columns for risk and mitigations as you have put in some sensible mitigations that are not obviously related to a particular risk.
Also since your part a) was weak you had difficulty in doing what they asked for part b)
Documentation
For a possible 10 marks, there was not much written here, nor was much you wrote in part a) to add to this.
In particular I'd have expected some form of document that explained who was to do what task when to enable the planning of different activities to conflict with each other as little as possible and make sure things were done in the right order.
In particular you didn't generally do enough to
explain how documentation ensures . For example I had difficulty in guessing what "document of station working rules" meant- I was thinking that this was about the methodogy of operating trains, but this doesn't seem to tally with the lat bullet in your first section which suggested that no train would be operated during the period. Perhaps it is something completely different such as a document giving the hazards that exist in the locality, perhaps buried services such as power or water, hazardous areas of restrictive clearances or outside the railway fence, weak roofs or confined spaces within the buildings, security arrangements etc. If you had explained how the document ensured safety then I could probably have worked out what you had failed to
describe but had really only
listed
Summary
Answer was on the right lines but needed more detail and should have been more carefully aligned to the precise question. It would have scored reasonably for the middle section but would have been struggling to pick up many marks in the first section and in particular the last portion. Given the mark weighting I therfore think that overall it would probably have been somewhat below a pass; I suspect that you have enough knowledge and that what you need is a little more practice in presenting your answer in a way that displays it better by fully addressing what you were asked.